bec高级写作图表技巧
在写bec图表作文的时候,描述时要抓住中心思想,围绕中心思想运用所有相关的数据或事实进行描述,烘托中心思想,而不是单纯的事实或数据罗列。下面介绍bec高级写作图表技巧,希望为您带来帮助。
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1. 描述数据或事实时要具体,不能笼统、空泛。
2. 描述时要抓住中心思想,围绕中心思想运用所有相关的数据或事实进行描述,烘托中心思想,而不是单纯的事实或数据罗列。为了突出中心思想要放弃一些不必要的事实或数据。
3. 得出的结论必须与分析的结果一致。有时一个总结论下可能有几个小结论,那么这几个小结论应该相互一致,不能相互排斥或与总结论相悖。另外,结论不能主观臆造、凭空想像,而一定是基于事实和分析得出的必然结果。
4. 如果在考试中出现了同样的分析而得出完全不同结论的情况,千万不要把这两个不同的结论混在一起来写。这时考生应选择自己最有. 把握的结论,并按照所选择的结论的思路去组织文字进行清晰的表述。写作时,应完全放弃另一个结论,不受另一个结论的干扰。
5. 表述时,考生应保持客观中立的立场,不带个人感情色彩,不宜褒贬渲染。
6. 使用规范正式语言表述,描述事态情景用词用语准确,既不夸大也不縮小。
7. 表述时,注意动词时态的一致,选择同一个时间基准。
8. 在120-140字的写作中,大体可以分为3~4个自然段来写。每段要有主题句(Topic sentence),并且要加上适当的过渡词。较好的过渡词,会使文字自然流畅,给短文增色不少。
9. 要想有效地组织好图表描述性短文,通常有两种组织描述性文字的顺序,一种是直接顺序(Direct order),另一种是间接顺序(Indirect order)。间接顺序则是先给出各种有序的事实和数据,然后逐步导向主题思想,得出结论。间接顺序法不会让阅卷人有强加之感,所以比较安全。阅卷人可以不赞同考生的观点或结论,只要考生分析合情合理,语言运用自然流畅,仍然是篇好短文,可以获得高分。因为BEC写作成绩主要取决于语言运用水平,而不是结论的对错,所以,为了更有把握,建议考生使用间接顺序法。
10.描述图表,可以分段按时间顺序对比性描述,也可以分段按不同的事物分别描述。描述过程中可以加人分析判断,从而得出结论。
如何搞定BEC写作图表作文饼状图
招数一:比较级和最高级
◆ 只针对一个饼图中的一个组成部分进行描述
The most popular mobile phone color is black.
The second most common color is white.
◆ 针对一个饼图中两个组成部分进行对比描述
White is considerably more common than red.
其中,根据饼图中不同份额之间的差异程度不同,副词considerably可以替换为substantially,a lot,far,much,somewhat,significantly,slightly和fractionally (微乎其微地,很细微地)等。
此外,A比B不仅可以多或好,还可以不如对方,甚至可以用同级比较的句型来对比两个事物。例如:
Red is far less popular than black.
Black is about twice as common as white.
招数二:确定性地描述某一事物在该饼图中所占份额
描述饼状图与柱状图和线形图另一个比较明显的区别是饼图中会非常清晰地标明每一份所占的比例是多少。所以,从语言学习的角度来看,掌握描述份额的句型就是重中之重了。可以引出份额的动词或动词词组有:be,make up,constitute,account for等。同时,可以使用定语从句relative clause (which + appropriate verb)引出所要描述的份额。例如:
Black, which is %, is considerably more common than red, which makes up %.
Black, which constitutes %, is about twice as popular as white, which is %.
The other colors, which constitute %, are considerably less popular than red, which accounts for %.
招数三:使用括号brackets ( )
Black (%) is considerably more common than red (%).
The other colors (%) are considerably less popular than red (%).
BEC图表类写作常用描述句型
1. At a slower rate... 以较低的速度……
2. It reflects the great differences that exist between...在……之间反应了巨大的差异
3. These figures were overwhelmingly greater than the corresponding figure of... 这些数据远远大于XXX的相关数据
4. It can be seen from the chart that significantly...-er(比较级)...than... 由图可以看出,XXX明显更……
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5. In all locations, A out numbered B... 在所有方面,A都比B……
6. These two pie charts (饼状图) show the differences between two groups of... 这两个饼状图显示了两组XXX之间的不同之处
7. The first point to note is the huge increase (in the number of)... 首先要注意的就是(数据方面的)巨幅增加
8. A is more than... times (bigger) than B . A比B多(大)XXX倍。
9. The biggest loss was to A, which decreased from... to... of the whole. 损失最大的是A,整体上,它从XXX降至XXX
10. The biggest gains (in graduate numbers) were made by A which, as a group, have increased by over...A获得了最大的效益,整体上,它增长了……
11. To sum up, ... 总之,……
12. This bar chart displays the numbers of... 该柱状图显示了XXX的数据
13. The chart reflects several trends. 该图显示了如下几种趋势……
14. But... we see a different trend emerging. 但是……我们发现了另一种趋势慢慢浮现
15. When we compare..., we see... 当比较……我们会发现……
16. This suggests increased educational opportunities for women in higher education. 这一点表明女性接受高等教育的机会得到增加。
17. According to the graph, ... 根据曲线图……
18. The proportion of... 所占比例……
19. There was a slight recovery... ……有轻微的恢复
20. ... has dropped dramatically ……已大幅下降
21. The general trend appears to be increases. 总体趋势似乎是在增长。
22. There were approximately... 大约有……
23. ... had jumped four fold to... ……已跃升四倍
24. ... rose sharply from... to...从……到……急剧上涨
25. Remained constant at... 保持在……
26. The overall trend for... 总体趋势……
27. The graph shows the percentage of... 该图所示……所占百分比……
28. We can see that... swell during the... hours, peaking at... am. 我们可以看到,……在XXX时间一路增长,在XXX时刻到达峰值。
29. Although the raw data does not provide an explanation for these trends 尽管原始数据没有为这些趋势提供解释
30. When coupled with the graphic information, leads to some possible conclusions... 结合图表信息,就可能得到一些结论……
BEC商务英语常用词汇短语
1. self-motivated积极主动的(人)
self-employed自由职业的 freelancer自由职业者
2. pilot Project试点项目
3. tackle discrimination解决歧视问题
4. raise the awareness of scale of justice提高人们对公正的认识
5. make something mandatory 将…强制
6. rule out the possibility of…排除…的可能性
7. assert oneself 坚持己见
8. quietly-spoken Person讲话声音小的人
9. on the spot 在场,马上,处于良好竞技状态,困难中
10. feel at ease=feel comfortable
11. open-ended question开放式问题
12. be far too nice太好了
13. dictate the direction of the interview决定面试的方向
14. run the risk of doing冒险做
15. inspire loyalty激发忠诚度
16. derive job satisfaction from what they do从工作中获得满足感
17. be evaluated subjectively by line managers被部门经理主观地评价
line manager-Your line manager is the person at work who is in charge of your department, group, or project. 部门经理
18. something that is intrinsic to the job工作中固有的成分
19. at will=carelessly
20. the flipside of this is反面
21. balance work and domestic schedules平衡工作和家庭
22. employees’ skills can be moulded to the needs of company根据公司的需求培养雇员
23. life expectancy 预期寿命
24. fund one’s retirement提供退休基金 retirement fund
25. supply of these younger workers dries up缺乏年轻雇员
26. sea-worthiness适航性
27. well-maintained ship保养良好的船
28. conditions remain hostile 情况持续不利
29. storm subside=weaken
30. mount an operation to transfer the oil off the ship=organize准备组织
