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终于认识托福独立写作满分

发布时间:2023-01-10 01:34:34

托福写作怎么得满分?托福写作满分不容易得到,但是并不是不能得到。那你知道托福独立写作满分吗?接下来小编告诉你托福独立写作满分。

托福独立写作满分:

一、举实例

思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.

更多句型:To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example

二、做比较

方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;

世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:

相似的比较:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …

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托福独立写作技巧:

一、对于topic sentence

1. TPO topic sentence:

The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work.

(缩短的周工作日可以提高公司的利润,因为员工可以感觉到更多的休整并且机警了,结果就是他们工作上犯错率减少了。)

二、对于supporting details

1. TPO 主体段:

First, American consumers are exposed to so much advertising that they would not value or even pay attention to the ecocertification label. Because so many mediocre products are labeled “new” or “improved”, American consumers do not place much trust in advertising claims in general.

新托福独立写作论证思路扩展方法:

一、段落主题思想要与全文观点相匹配

例题:Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目大意:如今食物变得越来越容易准备。这种变化是不是改善了人们的生活?

该问题中提供给考生探讨的要点是食物准备方式的改变是否提高生活质量。对此问题,一些考生马上就联想到:食物容易准备节约了时间,并就此给出段落中心词。但结合文章论点稍微深入思考一步就会发现,时间缩短这一项改变虽然是事实,但对于生活质量的影响并不直接,如果作为主要论点给出的话会使读者觉得该支持理由与主题观点并没有直接关联。所以对于这种容易想出但与文章中心关系并不密切的拓展思路就需要能及时舍弃。

二、段落主题句要能言之有物

这是再功利不过的一条标准,就上面这道题目而言,有的考生注意到了食物准备时间缩短与生活质量改善之间的思路跳跃,因此在两者中间补充说明,食物准备时间缩短能让人性情改变,从而影响人们的生活质量,构思时觉得该立意比较新颖,又能切合主题,继续写下去不无可能。但真正落笔时却不知道该如何说明人们性情转变这一抽象情况,并且自己平常生活中对此也并无较深入的感受和经验,结果说了一句话拓展就不得不匆匆收尾,导致读者要不就读得“意犹未尽”,要不就干脆觉得“云里雾里”。与其这样,还不如选个常见思路,如:快速的生活节奏造成压力,来展开拓展,这样即能展示语言功底,也能显示思维缜密的写作方向。

托福独立写作范文:

Way to learn about life

Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.

Both learning through personal experience and learning through the advice of others can help you in life. If you don't have a lot of knowledge about something, the advice of people you trust can be very valuable. They can tell you about their own experiences, and about the advantages and disadvantages of a situation. Then you can consider your own wants and needs and decide what you should do. Pretty soon, you'll have more experience of your own.

When you 're thinking about what you want to do with your life, friends and relatives are a great resource. They can give you information about things like jobs, school, volunteering, and traveling to other parts of the world. They've done a lot of learning in their lives, and you can use it to decide what you want to do with yours.

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